Friday 23 March 2012

Feedback on First Draft of Essay

PCAD 500 Penny, you have been splurging which is one good way to start writing - you could try some other techniques to organise your thoughts through improved structuring - we identified some themes through the text and wondered if these could be chapters? SILENCE, BLURRINESS, COMPANIONSHIP? Need to edit here and you need an opportunity to refine a few ideas rather than touch the surface with several. We thought that John Cages lectures and writings on silence would be useful. What would Liz Wells say about silence do you think?
By Lecturer Maddy Pethic

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